GRE作文每日一评:
Issue 20
”Most of the people we consider heroic today were, in fact, very ordinary people who happened to be in the right place at the right time.“
I agree with the statement insofar as our heroes tend to be ordinary people like us. However,I strongly disagree with the further assertion that people become heroes simply by being ”in the right place at the right time.“ If we look around at the sorts of people we choose as our heroes, we realize that heroism has far less to do with circumstance than with how a hero responds to it.
I concede that heroes are generally ordinary people. In my observation we choose as our heroes people with whom we strongly identify--people who are very much like us. In fact many of us call a parent, grandparent, or older sibling our hero. Why? My intuition is that the more a person shares in common with us--my terms of experience, heritage, disposition, motives, and even physical attributes--the more accessible that person's heroic traits are to us, and the stronger their attraction as a role model. And few would dispute that we share more in common with immediately family than with anyone else.
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典型句子结构:
I concede that...In my observation...In fact...Why? My intuition is that...
然后用渐强式句子来强调原题观点的正确:
The more...the more..., the more...
Few would dispute that...
但,在第二段就正式进入反驳并衍生观点了:
However, the statement's further suggestion that...is simply wrongheaded.
However, the statement's further suggestion that people become heroes merely as a result of circumstances not of their own choosing is simply wrongheaded. Admittedly, circumstance often serves as a catalyst for heroism.
春天来到了,花儿开的又红又大,像在比赛谁开的颜色最美丽又漂亮呢;小草己经长出又绿又嫩了;大树也不令外,长的高大又强壮。小鸟在大树上歌唱,小蜜蜂在花从中忙忙碌碌地工作,为人们酿造出甜甜的蜂蜜来。
Spring is coming, the large red flowers, like in the game who the most beautiful colors and beautiful; the grass has grown out of the trees are green and tender; not so long, tall and strong. Birds are singing in the trees, in the flowers bees in bustling about, for people to make sweet honey.
谁在这儿叹息呀?原来是小鸟,它是在为人类而叹息。因为大森林的树木要被人们砍伐了。如果大树被砍完了,森林里的动物就没有了家。如果大风来了没有了树木的帮助,房屋要倒塌。如果树木被砍了,人们就听不到小鸟叽叽喳喳的叫声,这个世界就只有人类在说话。
Who here sigh? The birds, it is for the human sigh. Because the forest of trees to be cut down. If the tree was cut down in the forest, the animal has no home. If the wind to help without trees, houses collapsed. If the trees were cut down, people can not hear the birds chirping, the world is only a human talking.
请大家爱护环境吧。
Let us care for the environment.
For China’s competitive sports, 20xx is an extremely brilliant year. In the post-Olympic era, a mass sport is bound to be more and more attention. In order to satisfy people's growing demand for physical fitness and in order to commemorate the success of the Beijing Olympic Games, the State Council approved on August 8 as ”National Fitness Day“, to convey healthy sporting spirit to the public and to promote the concept of healthy living.
The establishment of National Fitness Day is to adapt to people’s sports needs, to promote the national fitness campaign,to further develop the comprehensive functions of sport and social effect,to rich sporting and cultural life and to promote human’s comprehensive development. The most important is that National Fitness Day is the best way to commemorate the Beijing Olympic Games.
The new semester has been a week since the new semester, and the two weeks seem to be short, but they are so fast, and the future and taste, they are scattered. So, remember this week of learning and living memory.
On the first day, there is a feeling of tension. In secondary school, especially good middle school, the competition of learning is quite fierce, and there will be some pressure. Don#39;t be too bad at the end of the team, so you can#39;t relax at all, always be in the state of study. We have to get used to this tension to get good grades in three years.
The next day, I came to school, and I didn#39;t want to go to the school, so I wasted my good morning. I never missed a word when I listened to every word that my teacher said. I began to study hard and carefully to live the first day of my life. I am firmly committed to my dream and step by step, I will always enter the door of success.
今天我们又一次的来到了暑假的英语班开始了,既充实又好玩的英语课。
12点半我们乘车出发啊,空调车真凉快啊,车外的人在烈日炎炎下行走,怎么能受得了啊?下了车我才知道车里车外分别是两个世界,一个32度的中午把大地都晒出了热浪,仿佛把一个鸡蛋放在地上都能烤熟了。
好不容易“活着”走到了补习班,一进门,我才发现原来教室开空调了,在夏天空调,真的是我们的救星啊,老师让我交作业,我在手提包里找来找去结果一个作业本的影子都没找到,还好我们的老师是一个既可爱又迷人还仁慈的老师,她让我们下次一并交给她,结果我们另一个老师在批另一个作业时发火了,因为我们有些同学连基本的题目都做错,连我们可爱又迷人的老师也挨骂了,结果提前十分钟上课。听老师讲课时,我哈气连天也不知道怎么回事,24度的空调竟会这么热。
开始听写了,我刚松懈的身子又开始警戒起来,三分钟后我的身子全身冰凉,手上全无知觉,因为我感觉我考砸了,又开始上外教课了,外教是个黑人男老师,讲课生动有趣,我非常喜欢上他的课。结果这次我还考的异常地好。
一天愉快的下午很快地过去了。
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